【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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- ~6 R: I( G7 e9 G& a$ B+ d我另将歌词附在此。
! N  _6 i! L" @0 Z2 t+ v% `The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
, w( ~& n8 f% c( W: X1 Y9 Z* iThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
! S8 r: @+ C2 j" w9 j6 b/ eFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
$ K3 d, Y( {7 kWe meet and talk everyday,
+ ~/ Q; ], X- U' }  P7 G. ^But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
  z, Q9 S) `8 T% h* G) h0 T5 e: E! ULove… just the word love
9 {' z8 Z7 K- _$ gWhy is it so difficult to express?
# C1 H% D; U' _8 e/ J8 sI want to confess that I love you,
  g1 A5 z5 U( U; A( {; M* rBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
' e0 K9 Z. T9 I, v; OI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
- U+ s$ {1 G# O6 o5 b3 nI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
' d2 F) b' y$ g5 \8 g+ ~6 ICan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
& ^  {1 U  l7 ^" b. kLove… just the word love
2 Z7 z% m5 }4 ~: j2 m9 L  G  w: gWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
$ B9 C6 g9 L$ W- ?. R9 g2 V# pIf today isn’t too late,
1 ?3 l: V7 x: c! }# E& JI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
) y4 X1 u$ N: D, o0 ZCan I entrust it to you?
/ K/ f/ G5 H) ?; {! E$ \& a, _Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

0 i# U8 m" l1 f) K  F[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

% H& z% `. K8 `# u' V3 p<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
! @7 x; }4 d* H<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
& E  `; V& g7 x5 V+ K<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
; B1 _' G6 E! S<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
" w; `  I; P$ x1 F& T* I<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
! c- z. l% ]. f7 q<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
6 U+ @% z: R6 J2 I& H<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
5 T, p8 R. x: L% `" P  U<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
7 y. h7 }+ }4 E1 H. h' y4 Y3 r4 A<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
- u" t- x2 [) x1 {- M<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
3 }7 Y9 {' Y  A9 ^+ i$ b<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
7 ?+ F7 |9 y; r! S! g' J; p<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
' ]" I, S* f9 f  x/ C% t<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
% r: R$ ~  x& a3 s' x<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
. E! d6 G2 j4 A+ k<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
3 [, a4 |6 X4 ?( f) ~' ~<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
6 s- d; C/ u8 V# \8 ?$ B<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
* \6 X$ E. h& R2 i8 k8 d( @  V5 Z<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
( Y' w3 Z& C; ]( m! l2 W<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
* i7 E; O; Y7 }. {<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
. N, b8 S) Y2 c) ~7 q<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
. j5 N$ r% b; _% p6 R<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
0 Q/ r* F1 C  p<P>But I never did </P>
' |9 u' D6 e3 q/ K5 D! P# j<P>但我不会 </P>
/ k# r5 q% ~" m) ~<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
/ X" |3 O+ ?* |: u<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
$ F/ \& a! W$ y  @1 `<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
/ U% B$ S% O, y4 k. _<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
/ `, L# d* |' t9 E' Y; H<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
* W) I# s$ v5 ^" y9 ?9 C8 K<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

- [/ ?2 n- I' x) b1 n 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

, [2 o/ [+ }! G- i: n& h+ E: x这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

# r( m, \' r- |  o% ?3 }这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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2 x% {6 x, t+ z9 a: X) p<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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" s. t/ N& v' P; x: M<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>