【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
7 c+ m9 W# i$ l5 @+ aThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
; W, E( n, i4 ?( [2 i. GThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
7 P  y8 `9 y" o+ i& Z; xI already loved you with all my heart
6 B% P) k: c* a% T$ e+ H1 z7 g# EWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
3 _4 n( G8 |8 M4 w) Q1 K2 x$ N* j5 dIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
) m0 o. l3 k3 W$ j( eI would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
$ M( y2 K& k( Q2 o) P7 q+ YWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
- R4 r/ j+ F8 A& J; VBut I never did
. o/ `* F/ ^/ \  u# f% _2 @8 u6 FOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
8 u* d. R6 P8 t* R4 l% U# A7 n% EIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
' h# \  ]4 ^" `2 VI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
" [1 C7 E$ k0 nCan I entrust it to you?
0 X$ |- ]$ L4 a2 T7 }Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
5 |# K- Z# t: o6 H  s  |Why is it so difficult to express?
: E' z" S+ a0 N( E/ ]( CI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
& o/ O* {% E$ f- H2 SIf today isn’t too late,
4 P9 _( F+ _2 gI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
+ Z& R) y# V" n# }& }Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
0 ?  n9 y  k" V. lCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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  B5 A; i$ ~- D( O<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
* X& S/ L$ n# v) U8 w<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
  s( w2 b. T* a3 B1 D7 o<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
! ^4 d4 U- z3 z<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
. I3 y3 ]- k. T5 F<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
- U: p* d5 n) U5 d, Q<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
& t0 E; Y% C% N: Q" S' V4 A3 i<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
# p. t; X% C' q( @/ @7 [<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
! c1 [5 Z- {! |& C0 }1 }4 Q<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
, x$ `3 O" q, i<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
, a2 }5 Y& l5 f( s1 t/ n: y<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
2 Q$ ]6 B9 h' ?9 |3 P2 i<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
- O' x  B9 ]7 f* _0 K/ R0 [; P<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
: ?+ e% ~& s, Q. z<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
5 j0 C( F% O9 z; ~- A. n1 k<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
' K% u7 b9 j1 R& y<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
, s  ]- e: O" ^" i* m4 q% p# [) I+ p<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
" @7 n9 E. S6 ~8 E! a$ y# _4 |<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
) [: x+ X, O4 ?& K<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
: a' o3 ]5 C% v' @- V5 D<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
, \3 B8 h- j( j  d, ?<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
4 B, e+ v' V8 ]4 R: y<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
1 ?0 R6 a$ Q$ x" K& T6 |<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
0 d1 E8 z% j& L; M" G<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
3 D9 I: F$ P! b+ S/ _: i5 F+ B, ~<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
" k) R/ U: @) A1 U, ?, e<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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6 Q: C3 |( v+ y3 y3 r<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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5 @2 Y. [+ G7 s. ~+ S+ g<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>