【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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7 m  Q" L2 D; B% o7 G+ Y3 O. D0 Z我另将歌词附在此。
2 G' H+ s% `" M+ J0 kThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
6 ^! `# Q8 F8 T. f) E  J! `, o- KThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
4 h& z# e" f6 Q- FFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
. v# Q( J  b7 W0 N% ?  L/ [0 cI would probably know how you feel
/ T6 |8 n  i3 m- H7 }Love… just the word love
: b7 {5 ]1 D$ f6 }Why is it so difficult to express?
. r8 R. H8 ?2 _9 j6 d* a* [0 p" U3 oI want to confess that I love you,
" y  L7 T) R# GBut I never did
# @) X3 u7 b2 k4 ROne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
# z9 J" V$ U8 f( d& h! G* i1 ^( M& EI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
6 w: Z' d( P& E; c6 ?8 C1 BEntrust my love within your heart
- [% n# T3 j. H# l- Q& s: VLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
+ h: ]8 P/ y3 |' U# a1 B+ K( {I want to confess that I love you,
; {- r' \* w) D" S! DBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
3 t( N* ^3 q$ m" X  b8 fIf today isn’t too late,
9 p8 }9 d0 N5 k5 |I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
# l$ [" n) y4 v0 f, }7 D( JI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
  d0 m. q* y8 O( Z, u, @! tCan I entrust it to you?
$ j$ F4 w4 {. i/ `! AEntrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
5 ~' K8 Z9 P4 nEntrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
+ Q; z1 G7 }$ Q. `/ J, d1 B" @7 B<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
! M3 e0 A  s7 F+ |) ]) m<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
; p0 p; p, z- |<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
1 u: Z$ \) O4 B/ R' y; |% g, y<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
" r- T! R" X2 R5 q& k) j<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
' l' `% H5 R- ?# T$ |<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
- k- T! U4 S- E; t<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
5 C) }- G5 c/ t+ u: }# ?<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
4 Z6 k3 k% N( ]3 k! J, F, j<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
( s& i7 \- _  ^* v$ T3 z<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
0 d- r, A4 ?4 j<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
$ K3 C" c% g8 v4 _: T6 {<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
* T$ a+ b- w$ C<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
* T3 ~# ]0 f+ g- ^0 L& H& t% z* C<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
) X% T# g% h2 w4 @/ d& w<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
# \5 t. C1 |1 S" h, Z<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
, a2 o+ F0 P0 B3 P( F# c" g( u<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
: G2 B: {  ?# G9 m9 V<P>但我不会 </P>
; w4 d5 s4 q) U; h! e1 ~* M<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
' j- O) d+ ?& \" H# W' m<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
% y' r, f" ]  }6 Q7 h1 j<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
7 e  d6 r2 U0 i* B2 b) r0 T! x/ p<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
' k. L0 }) o; b! Q  w+ w8 J$ m<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
& x( z" v: e1 t; T) u6 S0 d4 }' @<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
  D7 Y' q! l% B% C<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
1 G1 R1 ~1 ~# G( e- }<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
+ [- O% r2 ?* X$ U) ]5 u<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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( @0 S# D# B3 ]) ], `3 w这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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, S4 A: f7 T# o* S0 i$ o这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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9 R+ e+ F# X9 t- F3 X$ {4 B3 O" }<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>