【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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6 h" l, V% O9 z歌词我附在后面。
1 R9 E) G' G3 ~7 h2 W: c# |The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
5 K  S7 H* u6 l% ^  qWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
/ N/ e6 ?. Z* P  a/ f2 SThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
4 l/ p2 g4 Z2 y2 r7 O  PSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
+ X. v8 ?! y& R& O7 K8 WEvery other word you utter is love
9 |' v' `' s2 R/ cI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
: W2 r" _6 I$ s* E  lNothing can compare to my love
4 ]( J- i% P, D$ ICan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
/ @- e1 t& z& x$ |& u$ m1 jI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
6 I. Q0 d  S& j% r1 H0 h8 H+ d. P7 nYour speech can’t even keep up with it
* s$ z, K" @! x5 u: oIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
2 J3 X! a8 v4 U/ Y5 KRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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* W; x. @: J. V<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
2 N4 Y4 Z- N7 g# D% b5 \<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
5 D+ c1 I1 G+ o2 |/ s5 h<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
- `- S3 q! E% ^<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
: ?0 B# A9 y' c1 H0 v<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
- o* G  m3 \" Y6 ~  B. d' J<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
3 T+ K% b# b0 p* _7 j; C' j<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
6 I( |$ K2 l: T<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
6 ]2 K' i$ |. [: ~+ C<P>你无需担心</P>
9 e. R; Y0 y/ Y3 J2 h, V<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
* q) B& Y7 e2 L# ?7 ]<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
( x6 m* c9 {/ U( J/ y<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
1 ^8 p4 d, f: h' g4 Q1 s$ N/ q<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
* r/ D9 b2 K+ c7 R# y<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
; r6 b0 J$ V  g3 W# u+ U<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
6 o: D9 Y' O" X<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
, \7 V9 F7 \( C8 ^( o& w2 {<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
$ u5 a$ w8 c  p9 K" b9 E<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
- \3 r* K% X4 j* w7 D. }  e<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
3 M) S3 j* D% v2 C8 p<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
* ~! c- Q. I" t2 V<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
/ L9 d, Y- L: O0 V; g<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
, r, y1 `0 h" g7 X<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
4 w* C3 o+ J( P  r1 b<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
# ?7 Z0 n' `( A<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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+ e" _) E8 s- I/ N<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>