【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
6 d7 h: N) y, K3 s; U1 F7 hMaking the sky glitter like gold,
6 z/ \3 J' [  q* o; zWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
5 H& d! B1 d, Z/ o: k; f- O1 x& BWith the moon kissing it every night
1 B/ W* G6 r& y) z' VSeeing the sky content with its love
% ~2 q( m( H1 p* A: ]5 O7 l" QIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
7 I. A0 K5 u9 {- i9 [+ p' }Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
! L# \3 `% I- p. z! LI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
5 r& R7 D& m4 XYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

4 ?6 [3 j; ?5 x1 Z2 @1 m) W+ g<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
, b% c3 |" O) d# X8 F* s<P>月光闪亮 </P>
: Q4 V! j% x4 S8 C) ]0 E) o<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
" n* r: G7 H2 |- ]<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
% p: u6 n4 D# Q1 a% G( O<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
6 f& h% K( p/ h/ O' p! t<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
5 K' ]( Y; b4 j" p  S<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
" F7 F5 y+ Y5 k7 x" S<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
6 v; D2 l9 N* f- n<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
% E' B% D2 K$ m$ s; J. b7 A4 f<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
/ ?: a! r( E0 F3 G+ I( `" p<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
: l9 G$ t+ m* u& k0 `2 t. J+ j: G<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
6 g3 @7 ?' m- C4 a<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
1 ^( d7 S  [; F+ N3 S( `<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
1 s: J2 K, ]' J" f2 a& p. \<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
7 ^2 u$ s1 v# \/ c9 n% f<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
& m" X& F2 l3 y; `2 S<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
! R0 g7 r( ^2 N0 P' P) L7 L+ Q<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
$ s' b* x+ e( A# y( \6 k<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
  c1 C5 T4 `! B: m" p0 _6 l+ h<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
( }: q0 Q' S8 o<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
# K7 `6 f( Y& i. h. m3 _9 a<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
  L/ C3 q# z8 ?& i5 M+ n<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
$ S- B2 ^7 l, N: R<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
* x7 f  w8 n5 i& b" Z) j6 N5 w: G<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
/ B$ T. z) ^9 Z9 B<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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' i* J+ w$ {- _: W我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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" D8 b; P/ ^5 F! w. N5 U1 y4 s<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>